Ryan Perez · Proposal system

A decision document, not a brochure.

The proposal contains only what the buyer needs to understand, trust and approve the recommended engagement. Company history, full capabilities and boilerplate live in supporting documents. Thirteen page layouts rendered below at page proportion.

The personalisation test If a paragraph could be sent unchanged to any company, personalise it or remove it.
Thirteen page specimens · US Letter proportion

Every proposal page, rendered

A worked example throughout — a qualified-lead funnel engagement. Pages are shown in reading order, and each carries the rule it exists to enforce.
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Proposal · Fixed scope Qualified-Lead Funnel and Website Prepared for Northline Group Inc.
Prepared byRyan Perez
Date28 August 2026
Version1.0
ConfidentialNorthline only
01 · Cover Name the outcome, not the service. “Qualified-Lead Funnel and Website Proposal” — never “Marketing Services Proposal”.
Decision summary
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A reader who sees only this page still understands the decision being asked of them.
02 · Decision summary One page. Condition, outcome, recommendation, investment, duration, decision required. This is Layer 1, and it must stand alone.
A note before the detail
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03 · Personal letter What we heard → why it matters → what we recommend → why we fit → what this document contains. It names the difficulty of choosing a partner rather than opening with company history.
Current condition
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Items marked observation are our inference from the data provided and require your validation before Phase I begins.
04 · Current condition Client-stated facts and your inferences are visually distinguished. An unlabelled inference presented as fact is how proposals lose credibility in the review meeting.
Desired outcomes
Type Target
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Baseline required Targets are meaningless without today's numbers. Baselines are captured in Phase I, week one.
05 · Desired outcomes Business, customer, operational and measurement outcomes kept separate — because they have different owners and different evidence.
Recommendation Qualify before the pitch, then rebuild the two pages that carry the decision
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06 · Strategic recommendation What to build, why this approach, what was rejected and why, and the assumptions holding it up. Rejected alternatives are what make it a recommendation rather than a preference.
1.0 Discovery & funnel diagnosis $14,500
Objective — determine the customer conditions and conversion barriers that currently block qualified enquiry.
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Duration 2–3 weeks Page 6 of 14
07 · Phase detail Numbered 1.0 / 1.1 / 1.2 so it can be referenced in negotiation. Priced at the phase, never per sub-activity — itemising invites the buyer to treat an integrated process as a menu.
Measurement
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Limitation No control group is possible on a single site. Seasonality is not isolated, so year-on-year comparison is the honest read.
08 · Measurement Baseline, target, source, frequency, owner — and the limitation. Stating what the measurement cannot prove is what makes the rest of it credible.
Timeline
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Committed Potential Approval gate
Durations assume consolidated feedback returned within five business days. Delays rebase the schedule.
09 · Timeline Approval gates marked, committed and potential phases visually distinct, and the client-response assumption stated on the page it affects.
Investment
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Payment schedule
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GST extra. Third-party costs (stock, licences) billed at cost with prior approval. Valid until 30 September 2026.
10 · Investment Committed total set apart from optional work. Tax, third-party costs, payment schedule and validity all on one page — nothing about money discovered later.
Responsibilities
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Single feedback source Northline nominates one authorised reviewer to consolidate comments. Fragmented feedback pauses the round rather than consuming it.
11 · Responsibilities Provider, client, shared. The shared column is where most engagements actually fail, so it gets equal weight rather than a footnote.
Comparable engagement Public-sector booking flow, procurement unblocked
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Result verified by third-party audit. Client has released the report; available on request.
12 · Evidence Comparable condition → intervention → verified result → relevance to this proposal. The fourth line is the one most case studies omit and the only one the buyer needs.
Acceptance
Selected engagement
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On signature: 40% deposit invoiced, kickoff scheduled within five business days. This proposal expires 30 September 2026.
13 · Acceptance Explicit option selection, authorised signer, and what actually happens on signature. If signing does not immediately start work, that condition is stated here.
Three layers

Each layer answers a different reader

The signer reads Layer 1. The person who has to run the engagement reads Layer 2. Procurement and the sceptic read Layer 3. Collapsing them is why proposals get long and still fail to answer anything.
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Fourteen types

Client condition selects the form

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Selection engine

Eight branches

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What to change

Five habits that weaken a proposal

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Structures by decision type

Six running orders

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CTA progression

The ask changes with the stage

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Never place the acceptance CTA before the buyer has seen scope, investment and risk. “Ready to get started?” on page two is asking for a decision the reader cannot yet make.
Deliverable descriptions

The same deliverable, twice

Object + purpose + contents + format + quantity + acceptance. The left one is a dispute waiting to happen; the right one can be checked off.
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Phase specification

Nine fields, all required

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Scope control

Seven branches

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Correction and revision are different things. Work that fails to meet the approved criteria gets fixed without consuming a discretionary round.
Revision system

Define the round, not the number

“Three revisions” is not a term. This is.
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Timeline & evidence

Eleven rules

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Three presentations

One recommendation, three options, or phased

Recommended engagement Qualified-lead funnel, three phases
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$68,400 + GST
40% on signature · 30% at Phase II approval · 30% on launch
One recommendation Use when one solution is clearly appropriate. A committed number, not a range.
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We recommend the middle option: Foundation cannot deliver attributed measurement, which is the outcome you named as primary.
Three options Only when the options solve genuinely different levels of need — and never offer a cheapest option that cannot achieve a responsible outcome.
Phased investment
Phase Decision unlocked Fee
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Each phase buys a decision, not just deliverables. You can stop after any one of them.
Phased When later work depends on earlier findings. Naming the decision each phase unlocks is what stops it reading as an instalment plan.
Seven models

When each one applies

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A range like $365,000–$765,000 communicates unresolved scope. If the range is wide because discovery is incomplete, sell discovery — or name the variables that move the number.
Point-based model

Ten things the proposal must define

Purchased points → prioritised work → visible consumption → replenishment. The last item on the list is the one that prevents every dispute.
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What points do not guarantee Points buy prioritised capacity, not a fixed outcome, not a fixed date, and not unlimited revision. Say so in the proposal, not in the first difficult month.
Generation gate

Eight conditions before a final proposal exists

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If information is missing
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Agent contract

Machine-readable

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Ecosystem

Five documents, not one

Everything the proposal does not need lives somewhere it can be reused.
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LAKA states

Ten proposal treatments

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The central principle The proposal contains only what the buyer needs to understand, trust and approve the recommended engagement. Everything else belongs in a capabilities, evidence, contractual or onboarding document.